One Deep Breath — Daybreak

20 Aug

Daybreak

Barefoot in my cool kitchen
I make my coffee by rote and watch
The birds eat their breakfast

More Daybreak poems at One Deep Breath.
All content written by Liza Lee Miller unless otherwise noted.
© 2007, Liza Lee Miller. Creative Commons License

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7 Responses to “One Deep Breath — Daybreak”

  1. Neefer 20 August, 2007 at 10:10 am #

    I like this one.

  2. Clare 21 August, 2007 at 5:33 am #

    Really nice images in this!! It sounds like a perfect morning.
    🙂

  3. Becca 21 August, 2007 at 1:30 pm #

    Your haiku describes my morning perfectly…making coffee “by rote” is a great image!

    Nicely done!

  4. Marcia (MeeAugraphie) 21 August, 2007 at 8:11 pm #

    Even though coffee is made by rote, you make the overall moment feel relaxing and peaceful.

  5. Tumblewords 21 August, 2007 at 8:46 pm #

    I can see this – actually I often live these words.

  6. Megan 22 August, 2007 at 6:31 pm #

    such a nice image of beginning a day…home comforts

  7. patois 23 August, 2007 at 11:02 am #

    My feet are cold reading your poem. It’s all rote, isn’t? Your coffee and your watching the birds and their eating breakfast. Delightful poem.

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