Without the sun

26 Nov

The sun slipped behind
Fingers pointing at the sky
Cold in the shadow

More Rock poems at One Deep Breath.
All content written by Liza Lee Miller unless otherwise noted.
© 2007, Liza Lee Miller. Creative Commons License

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7 Responses to “Without the sun”

  1. Soulless 26 November, 2007 at 10:59 pm #

    It is wonderfully imaginative of you to ‘see’ those “fingers pointing at the sky” in the photo. This is such inspired writing.

    Cheers.

  2. qualcosa di bello 27 November, 2007 at 5:44 am #

    stunning imagery in your words…i would be able to see it even without the gorgeous photo.

  3. Tumblewords 27 November, 2007 at 11:51 am #

    Oh, I love these rocks. Clever you to see the fingers. And it does look very chilly there in the shade!

  4. LittleWing 27 November, 2007 at 4:05 pm #

    another great one…photos and words…i like it

  5. krissie 27 November, 2007 at 7:45 pm #

    you found just the right photo to go with the wonderful words…how great is that? And yes those rocks do look like fingers pointing to the sky.

  6. BARONE 29 November, 2007 at 1:45 pm #

    “Fingers pointing at the sky” is wonderful, with and without the photo. I am off to visit your other haiku….jodi barone

  7. blackeyedsusan 30 November, 2007 at 11:13 am #

    yes. like what you do.

    bes

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