Winter Wonders – One Deep Breath

27 Jan

Unknown flock

I watch your flock land
I can’t tell what birds you are
You are so lovely.

More Winter Wonders poems at One Deep Breath.
All content written by Liza Lee Miller unless otherwise noted.
© 2008, Liza Lee Miller. Creative Commons License


9 Responses to “Winter Wonders – One Deep Breath”

  1. Crafty Green Poet 28 January, 2008 at 12:43 am #

    wonderful photo! I love your words too, I’ve often found myself thinking just that!

  2. spacedlaw 28 January, 2008 at 9:40 am #

    Lovely picture and haiku!

  3. Tumblewords 28 January, 2008 at 10:06 am #

    Love the black-white and the ‘unknown’ quality of both the photo and your words!

  4. qualcosa di bello 29 January, 2008 at 8:08 am #

    i often wonder that very same thing when the birds are in silhouette…this is so beautiful…words & image

  5. LittleWing 30 January, 2008 at 11:04 am #

    ohhh, that was so very very awesome… the picture is outright beautiful and your ku is just well, did i tell you how beautiful that is….totally into birds and who they are…i love to see the flocks fly….right now the geeze are everywhere in the fields…and when they fly…well, it’s just perfection…

  6. Liza Lee Miller 30 January, 2008 at 9:46 pm #

    Thank you. Thank you ALL. You can’t imagine how much I needed this boost. I have been unable to write poetry since the holidays. Don’t know why but I just couldn’t. I wrote this feeling that it was merely adequate and would get me moving in the right direction again. To get praise on it is so encouraging. Thank you!

  7. valderbar 1 February, 2008 at 7:22 am #

    Yummy poem.

  8. Abby 1 February, 2008 at 4:05 pm #

    What a great image… and the poem is amazing; I think I like the mystery of both the poem and the picture.

  9. Megan 2 February, 2008 at 7:59 pm #

    that is a REALLY great photo…amazing.

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